Very nice
Your vocals are a bit monotonous though. Far to deppressing and not very livly. A bit emo you might say. But there consistant and there not terrible. The guitar is wonderful. Very well done. did you play it properly or did you do it in FL or another program.
I do like the solo towards the end. Very nice. I just think your vocals could be a bit more livly and maybe change pitch or tone a bit.
Still good work. Pls can you check out my work.